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What does it mean to suffer in heaven? Eve knows the answer and Leben is going to find out. After all what's love without a little bit of pain involved?

A 20,000 word visual novel made for the Menhera VN Jam. Love, eternity, death and time await.

This is a work for adults and may deal with difficult or upsetting themes. Viewer discretion is advised.

Published 4 days ago
StatusReleased
Rating
Rated 5.0 out of 5 stars
(5 total ratings)
AuthorMismatched Wings
GenreVisual Novel
TagsEroge, Female Protagonist, LGBT, menheravnjam, Mental Health, Yuri

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hollow-hearts-1.3-pc.zip 359 MB
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Really great little game that does so much in its word count. Like other commenters have already mentioned, the drawn backgrounds have a rough, sketchy feel to them that give the whole setting a familiar but also otherworldly feeling. The game has really great enshutsu even with its very limited assets and it uses them to give its important scenes an appropriate feeling of weight.

There's one really inspired sequence in particular near the middle of the game that has a layer of background art tearing through another piece of art that a friend described as Gekidan Inu Curry esque. And there's the little closing sequence right at the end with the photo 🧎.

I found the writing really nice and not at all wordy. It has a nice sense of rhythm. I think the idea I'm left thinking about most from the story after having finished it a few days ago is just how nothing in the world stays constant, not even yourself, or selves. Maybe to borrow some words, the thoroughgoing impermanence of all dharmas.

We want to capture a moment of ourselves when we felt happiest, and keep it preserved in amber, preserved in a photograph, and promise to stay as that version of ourselves, but it's always already slipping through our fingers. In eternity there's infinite time to do or be whatever we want, but also an infinite number of our old selves we pass through and have to let become memories, become ashes. It's scary feeling your old selves dying, and even scarier reaching for something now knowing that no matter how hard you try to hold onto it, it will only have been a moment in infinite time.

I guess you could tell from this review I related much more strongly to the heroine Eve than the POV character Leben, but they're both great and have cute chemistry.

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gay angels stuck in teh rain together.........

i really loved the visual presentation of the backgrounds and the more elaborate effects of ripped pieces. i feel bad for hte OG pieces but they died for a good reason u_u the chars are very cute i quite like how their personalities click and clash.  having a relationship involve a 3rd person and the past is an angle i quite like seeing, those emotions are very real

when i finished hte 'bad' ending first, i felt like completing the other one really recontextualised that in a way that made my brain feel good. the final scene was very impactful for me.

thanks for makign this wonderful lil game!

The presentation of this game is immaculate. The character art is quite expressive and the final sections where the backgrounds kinda melt are great.

The writing is rather wordy for my own taste, but I think it captures the longing and isolation both characters feel. It explores the psychology of the characters, the guilt they have, and the kind of suffering they face living in purgatory. Refreshing to see a “no stones left unturned” approach.

My only real criticism is that the NVL textbox doesn’t contrast well with the background at times. It’s hard to read the text.

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"For the first time in my life I wish that I had more experience interacting with other people. I can’t think of a way to communicate with this person."

This statement kicks off a series of deeply introspective vignettes or two people struggling in complimentary ways. Leben is one who longs for the the comfortability of knowing and being perceived by the one you care about because the lack of it brings immense distress. And Eve is one who yearns for the same, but isolates and self sabotages because the pain she can control is safer than the pain she cannot. Their chance meeting becomes the catalyst for the first chance in a long time at personal growth. Where that path leads is up to each other. 

(I also really loved the BG art. I felt it was so expressive but highlighted the otherworldliness of the setting)